5.27 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! Good afternoon!
Unemployment is one of the most serious problems facing developed nations today. What are the advantages and disadvantages of reducing the working week to thirty hours?
Unemployment is one of the most serious problems in Korea, too.
I think that reducing the working week gives us an advantage of sharing opportunities.
But however, we could have ended up with low income, I think that is one of the disadvantages.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Hi, MR. [이름]!
Thank you for answering today\'s homework. Reducing the work week has advantages and disadvantages. A shorter working week would make us healthier, give us more fulfilling and sustainable lives and be better for the environment. Anyway, enjoy your work.^^
~Kelly^^
Hi there! Good afternoon!>> Correct.Unemployment is one of the most serious problems facing developed nations today. What are the advantages and disadvantages of reducing the working week to thirty hours?Unemployment is one of the most serious problems in Korea, too.
>> Correct.I think that reducing the working week gives us an advantage of sharing opportunities.
>> I think that reducing the working week gives us an advantage of exploring other opportunities. But however, we could have ended up with low income, I think that is one of the disadvantages.>> However, we could end up with low income, and that is one of the disadvantages.Thank you!
>> Correct.
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