5-27th Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Actually, we didn't have any special plan in this weekend because of entering examination for universities.
But the earthquake abruptly happened in the middle of this week so that the examination could not be taken.
So, we decided the travel suddenly.
The destination that we were going to was Tonyeong where it is the southern of Korea.
This city is famous for General Lee of Chosun dynasty.
There is new playground using a cart that is like a luge.
The luge is an event of winter sports using a sled.
The cart is very similar with the sled, but we are playing on the ground instead of a ice slope.
The length of slope is very long, so it would take about 3 minutes to get the end line.
Now, there is just one slope, but others will be constructed.
Even though it was a little cold, so many people enjoyed it.
In the summer season, we must wait in line to take it for 2 hours.
Fortunately, we didn't take a long to enjoy it.
However, because of the cold weather, the fingers became an ice stick.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]! :)
I\'m glad to know that you enjoyed your weekend even if it was just an impromptu plan.
I guess your entire family enjoyed it.
They say that the best trips are the ones that are unplanned because a lot of surprises come your way.
I hope I could also have a good time sometime soon.
See you again on Thursday. :)
~Teacher C[이름]
Actually, we didn\'t have any special plan in this weekend because of entering examination for universities.
>> Actually, we didn\'t have any special plans for this weekend because of the entrance examination in universities.
But the earthquake abruptly happened in the middle of this week so that the examination could not be taken.
>> But the earthquake abruptly happened in the middle of this week so the examination was postponed.
So, we decided the travel suddenly.
>> So, we decided to suddenly travel.
The destination that we were going to was Tonyeong where it is the southern of Korea.
>> The destination that we were going to was Tonyeong and it is in the southern part of Korea.
This city is famous for General Lee of Chosun dynasty.
>> This city is famous because of General Lee of the Chosun Dynasty.
There is new playground using a cart that is like a luge.
>> There is a new playground that uses a cart that looks like luge.
The luge is an event of winter sports using a sled.
>> Luge is a winter sport that uses a sled.
The cart is very similar with the sled, but we are playing on the ground instead of a ice slope.
>> The cart is very similar with the sled, but we are playing on the ground instead of an ice slope.
The length of slope is very long, so it would take about 3 minutes to get the end line.
>> The length of slope is very long, so it would take about 3 minutes to get to the end of the line.
Now, there is just one slope, but others will be constructed.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Right now there is only one slope but others will be created soon.
Even though it was a little cold, so many people enjoyed it.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Many people enjoyed it even though it was a little cold.
In the summer season, we must wait in line to take it for 2 hours.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> We have to wait in line during summer season just to experience it for two hours.
Fortunately, we didn\'t take a long to enjoy it.
>> Fortunately, we didn\'t take long to enjoy it.
However, because of the cold weather, the fingers became an ice stick.
>> However, because of the cold weather our fingers became like an ice stick.
I\'m glad to know that you enjoyed your weekend even if it was just an impromptu plan.
I guess your entire family enjoyed it.
They say that the best trips are the ones that are unplanned because a lot of surprises come your way.
I hope I could also have a good time sometime soon.
See you again on Thursday. :)
~Teacher C[이름]
Actually, we didn\'t have any special plan in this weekend because of entering examination for universities.
>> Actually, we didn\'t have any special plans for this weekend because of the entrance examination in universities.
But the earthquake abruptly happened in the middle of this week so that the examination could not be taken.
>> But the earthquake abruptly happened in the middle of this week so the examination was postponed.
So, we decided the travel suddenly.
>> So, we decided to suddenly travel.
The destination that we were going to was Tonyeong where it is the southern of Korea.
>> The destination that we were going to was Tonyeong and it is in the southern part of Korea.
This city is famous for General Lee of Chosun dynasty.
>> This city is famous because of General Lee of the Chosun Dynasty.
There is new playground using a cart that is like a luge.
>> There is a new playground that uses a cart that looks like luge.
The luge is an event of winter sports using a sled.
>> Luge is a winter sport that uses a sled.
The cart is very similar with the sled, but we are playing on the ground instead of a ice slope.
>> The cart is very similar with the sled, but we are playing on the ground instead of an ice slope.
The length of slope is very long, so it would take about 3 minutes to get the end line.
>> The length of slope is very long, so it would take about 3 minutes to get to the end of the line.
Now, there is just one slope, but others will be constructed.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Right now there is only one slope but others will be created soon.
Even though it was a little cold, so many people enjoyed it.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Many people enjoyed it even though it was a little cold.
In the summer season, we must wait in line to take it for 2 hours.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> We have to wait in line during summer season just to experience it for two hours.
Fortunately, we didn\'t take a long to enjoy it.
>> Fortunately, we didn\'t take long to enjoy it.
However, because of the cold weather, the fingers became an ice stick.
>> However, because of the cold weather our fingers became like an ice stick.
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