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Please share the lessons that you learned from the recent book that you\'ve read.
I read a book about how architectures remember the pain of history. The most interesting part was about an architecture that was built in 1960s. It was used to torture students, activists, and politicians who were against the regime. The window was so small that inside the architect was dim enough to cause fear even at noon. We could see the ambivalent features of the architect from a church he constructed, which was beautiful indeed, but lacks understanding of human. From this book, I learned that humanity and empathy is the most essential part nonetheless of what you ate doing. And I came to the conclusion that I want to be a psychiatrist who at least tries to understand their patients.
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- T. Gabby :)
Please share the lessons that you learned from the recent book that you\'ve read.
>> Correct.
I read a book about how architectures remember the pain of history.
>> Correct.
The most interesting part was about an architecture that was built in 1960s.
>> Correct.
It was used to torture students, activists, and politicians who were against the regime.
>> Correct.
The window was so small that inside the architect was dim enough to cause fear even at noon.
>> Correct.
We could see the ambivalent features of the architect from a church he constructed, which was beautiful indeed, but lacks understanding of human.
>> Correct.
From this book, I learned that humanity and empathy is the most essential part nonetheless of what you ate doing.
>> From this book, I learned that humanity and empathy are the most essential parts of what we do.
And I came to the conclusion that I want to be a psychiatrist who at least tries to understand their patients.
>> Correct.
- T. Gabby :)
Please share the lessons that you learned from the recent book that you\'ve read.
>> Correct.
I read a book about how architectures remember the pain of history.
>> Correct.
The most interesting part was about an architecture that was built in 1960s.
>> Correct.
It was used to torture students, activists, and politicians who were against the regime.
>> Correct.
The window was so small that inside the architect was dim enough to cause fear even at noon.
>> Correct.
We could see the ambivalent features of the architect from a church he constructed, which was beautiful indeed, but lacks understanding of human.
>> Correct.
From this book, I learned that humanity and empathy is the most essential part nonetheless of what you ate doing.
>> From this book, I learned that humanity and empathy are the most essential parts of what we do.
And I came to the conclusion that I want to be a psychiatrist who at least tries to understand their patients.
>> Correct.
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