5.28 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi ma'am! Good morning!
Can anger management sessions help a person deal with her anger?
Yes. I totally agree with that. Some kind of managements help us to control our mind from out of control situation. They are expert already.I think we must believe them. They are people who do a lot of research in the field of anger management.I am sure that they will help us deal with our anger.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Hello Mr. [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework really early today. Have a stree free day!
~KeLLy~
Hi ma\'am! Good morning!>> Correct.Can anger management sessions help a person deal with her anger?Yes. I totally agree with that.
>> Correct.
Some kind of managements help us to control our mind from out of control situation.
>> Some kind of management sessions help us to control our mind from an out of control situation.
They are expert already.
>> They are experts already.
I think we must believe them.
>> Correct.
They are people who do a lot of research in the field of anger management.
>> They do a lot of research in the field of anger management.
I am sure that they will help us deal with our anger.>> Correct.Thank you!
>> Correct.
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