5/28 homework

Kindly go over your sentences below [이름]!

Thanks a lot for writing this.

~Teacher Shanee^^,

[If you could live at any time in history when would it be?]

If I can go back to the past, I would live at 1987.

>>> If I could go back to the past, I would like to live in 1987.
 I was born in 1987.

>>> Correct!
 At that season, Korea was changed a lot. 

>>> In that year, Korea changed a lot.
 The Olympic games were held on Seoul at 1988.

>>> The Olympic games were held in Seoul in 1988.
 And many historical events took place in Korea such as IMF (International Monetary Fund) financial crisis.

>>> And many historical events took place in the country such as IMF (International Monetary Fund) financial crisis.
 Simultaneously, Korea was developed so rapidly.

>>>  Correct!
 My ages experienced both of Korea. 

>>> There were a lot of things that happened in Korea since I was born. (I can\'t understand this.)
 But, I can not remember all. 

>>> But I cannot remember them all.
 So, If I can, I want to make my memory a lots.

>>> So, if I can, I want to live during that time and make lots of memories.