5. 28 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름], ^^
See you in class later.
Blair
SNS made people closer and closer and people are like living with other people for 24 hours. we can contact anyone as we send a message in anytime. But it can\'t make us not lonly and also it worsens our tiress. After class, I should check the group chatting room for team project. I can\'t take a rest even though at 1 AM if there\'s a team assignment. Team members always send their opinion and it\'s so irritating. I want not to watch my phone for a long time but I can\'t. Because the only method to contact my boyfriend is through my phone. It\'s very useful but It makes me work everytime.
SNS made people closer and closer, and it could make them feel like they\'re with them 24/7. We can contact anyone as we send messages anytime. However, at times it could exhaust us too. After class, I should check the group chat for our team project. I can\'t take a rest even though it\'s already 1 AM especially if we have a group homework or project. Team members always send their opinion and it\'s so irritating. I don\'t want to use my phone for a long time but I don\'t have a choice, given that it\'s my way of communication with my boyfriend.
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