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2018-05-29 · 첨삭 강사 May

학생이 쓴 원문

I think religion is what people believe to forget the fear of death. I have not religion. So, fear of death and the afterlife always follows me. But i can go to temples and churches any place ease. Sometimes i think ,if i want to have religion.

강사 첨삭

Hi Sir [이름]! How are you?

Thanks for your answer. I have a religion.

My religion is Catholic. About 80% of Filipinos are Catholic.

Talk to you later! ^^

~~Teacher May~~

I think religion is what people believe to forget the fear of death.
>> CORRECT
I have not religion.
>> I have no religion.
So, fear of death and the afterlife always follows me.
>> So I always fear about death and think about afterlife.
But i can go to temples and churches any place ease.
>> But I try to go to the temples and churches.
Sometimes i think ,if i want to have religion.

>> Sometimes, I think of wanting to have a religion.

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