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2018-05-29 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Creative writing:  If you will have to choose to become someone other than yourself, who would it be and why? ㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡ If I can changed to myself another person, I want to be a actress \'Meghan Markle\'. She is act to drama of \'Suits\' and she is hollywood star. Besides, the latest she merried to prince Herny in england. So I think that these are not easy and very romentic. And I think if you are woman, anyone dreamed to this about once. Sometimes I dream to uncommon life different from now.

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Creative writing: 
If you will have to choose to become someone other than yourself, who would it be and why?
ㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡ
If I can changed to myself another person, I want to be a actress \'Meghan Markle\'. 

>> If I can change myself to another person, I want to be the actress, \'Meghan Markle\'.
 She is act to drama of \'Suits\' and she is hollywood star. 

>> She acted on the drama \'Suits\' and she is a Hollywood star.
 Besides, the latest she merried to prince Herny in england. 

>> She recently married Prince Harry of England.
 So I think that these are not easy and very romentic. >> romantic

>> Correct
 And I think if you are woman, anyone dreamed to this about once. 

>> I think if you are a woman, everyone dreamed of this once.
 Sometimes I dream to uncommon life different from now.

>> Sometimes, I dream of uncommon life different from what I have now.

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