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2018-05-30 · 첨삭 강사 May

학생이 쓴 원문

Is religion important to you? Why or why not? Not as much as other people who are affected religion. But if I choose one, I can say that I'm more like Buddhism. I went to temple since I was very young, which is the only thing I remember about religion. It is also related with my personality, I believe sort of Shamanism, traditional thing. Thats why I was interested in Buddhism. I still go there sometimes and but it doesn't mean It is most important to me.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thanks for doing your homework.

My religion is Catholic. About 80% of Filipino are Catholic.

Sometimes I also go to Christian church.

It\'s not a big deal for me if I try to visit other churches.

Hope to talk to you again next time. ^^

~~Teacher May~~

Not as much as other people who are affected religion.
But if I choose one, I can say that I\'m more like Buddhism.

>> CORRECT

I went to temple since I was very young, which is the only thing I remember about religion.

>> I used to go the temple since I was very young, which is the only thing I remember about religion.

It is also related with my personality, I believe sort of Shamanism, traditional thing.

>> It is also related with my personality. I somewhat believe of Shamanism which is a traditional thing.

Thats why I was interested in Buddhism.

>> That\'s why I was interested in Buddhism. 

I still go there sometimes and but it doesn\'t mean It is most important to me.

>> I still go there sometimes but it doesn\'t mean that it is more important for me.

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