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1. interactive
2. involves
3. basically
4. adrenaline rush
5. extensive
1. I usually did interactive activities such as team projects, volunteer works and part time jobs.
2. The preference for respectable jobs still exists. It involves employees who be productive and positive, flexible working environmet and well-paid jobs.
3. When we are young, kids basically fantasized about becoming scientists or doctors. However, recently I heard that Korean kids wish to be YouTuber who have media.
4. I paid through the nose for academy in order to learn programs. When I used my credit card, I got an adrenaline rush.
5. We had no extensive knowlege but we were able to complete the presentation without a hitch. It probably would be that we spoke clearly and confidently.
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2. involves
3. basically
4. adrenaline rush
5. extensive
1. I usually did interactive activities such as team projects, volunteer works and part time jobs.
>> I usually did interactive activities, such as team projects, volunteer works, and part time jobs.
2. The preference for respectable jobs still exists. It involves employees who be productive and positive, flexible working environmet and well-paid jobs.
>> The preference for respectable jobs still exists as this involves employees who can be productive and positive, flexible working environment, and well-paid jobs.
3. When we are young, kids basically fantasized about becoming scientists or doctors. However, recently I heard that Korean kids wish to be YouTuber who have media.
>> When we are young, kids basically fantasized about becoming scientists or doctors. However, recently I heard that Korean kids wish to be YouTubers.
4. I paid through the nose for academy in order to learn programs. When I used my credit card, I got an adrenaline rush.
>> I paid through the nose to go to an academy to learn programs. When I used my credit card, I got an adrenaline rush.
5. We had no extensive knowlege but we were able to complete the presentation without a hitch. It probably would be that we spoke clearly and confidently.
>> We had no extensive knowledge but were able to complete the presentation without a hitch. It was probably because we spoke clearly and confidently.
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