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I have long academic experiences and sometimes it makes me more difficult to find a job.
If the interviewer asks me for the question, I will respond as that I want to work at the place where I need me.
I think the final decision can be made after the final acceptance.
I want to do my best regardless of the university\'s reputation and grade.
If I get the acceptance decision, I will start to think about what I can do and what is a benefit and disadvantage there.
After then, if I determine the university is not good to research, I and refuse the contract.
They evaluated me, but I also will evaluate them after final decision.
Many universities want a smart professor who has a lot of experience and high-grade performance.
However, I also want to ask them what they do to get their research results and to use their research performance and skills.
Some university requires very high-quality and quantity performance, but they don\'t financially support.
They will lose the smart researcher soon.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
Your ideas are on point as usual. It is truly sad that most universities and not just them, even other companies require too much from their employees and even their applicants but the compensation is not worth all the effort and the experience. Therefore, it is still best to look for companies that treat their workers well and compensate them based on their qualifications and experience. Anyway, I hope for the best for you always. May you find the university that values your hard work and passion for research.
-Rachel
I have long academic experiences and sometimes it makes me more difficult to find a job.
>> correct
>> I have a lot of experience being in the academe, so sometimes, it is challenging for me to land a job because some think I am over-qualified.
If the interviewer asks me for the question, I will respond as that I want to work at the place where I need me.
If the interviewer asks me for the question, I will respond as that I want to work at the place where I need me.
>> If the interviewer asks me that question, I will say that I want to work in a place that needs me.
I think the final decision can be made after the final acceptance.
I think the final decision can be made after the final acceptance.
>> correct
I want to do my best regardless of the university\'s reputation and grade.
I want to do my best regardless of the university\'s reputation and grade.
>> correct
>> I want to put my best foot forward regardless of the university\'s reputation and evaluation.
If I get the acceptance decision, I will start to think about what I can do and what is a benefit and disadvantage there.y
>> If I get accepted, I will start to plan my next steps and consider what the pros and cons are if I stay there.
After then, if I determine the university is not good to research, I and refuse the contract.
After then, if I determine the university is not good to research, I and refuse the contract.
>> Then if I determined that the university is not good for research work, I will refuse the contract.
They evaluated me, but I also will evaluate them after final decision.
They evaluated me, but I also will evaluate them after final decision.
>> correct
Many universities want a smart professor who has a lot of experience and high-grade performance.
Many universities want a smart professor who has a lot of experience and high-grade performance.
>> correct
>> Many universities prefer a qualified professor who has a holds of experience under his/her belt and with high-grade performance.
However, I also want to ask them what they do to get their research results and to use their research performance and skills.
However, I also want to ask them what they do to get their research results and to use their research performance and skills.
>> correct
>> However, I also want to ask them how they achieve their research results and what they will do with them.
Some universities require very high-quality and quantity performance, but they don\'t financially support.
Some universities require very high-quality and quantity performance, but they don\'t financially support.
>> correct
>> Some universities demand exceptional research performance, but they don\'t support financially.
They will lose the smart researcher soon.
They will lose the smart researcher soon.
>> correct
>> If this is the case, there is a high probability that they will lose the smart researcher soon.
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