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~T. Jessie~

How would I feel if I found out I was adopted?
I will try find the rich my biological parents as like korea drama.

>> I will try to find my rich biological parents just like in Korean dramas.

Almost biological parents is rich in drama ^^\\
>> Almost all biological parents are rich in dramas ^^\\
If I am adopted a child...

>> If I am an adopted child...
I will be thanks to adoptive parents so so much.

>> I would be so much thankful to my adoptive parents.
And I will respect for them.

>> And I will respect them.
Adopt a child is too difficult thing.

>> Adopting a child is a difficult thing to do.

Honestly I can\'t seem to do it.

>> Correct!
And then...

>> Correct!
I will try find my biological parents.

I want to know why I was adopted.

>> Correct!
But I worry they haven\'t want me.
>> But I worry that they don\'t want me.
Even so I will live happily as I\'m now.

>> Even so I will live as happily as I\'m now.