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Personal routine is very helpful for personal mental health and important for marriage last long.
I thought I will do everything together with my husband if I getting married before I got married.
However, I realized that doing together and sharing personal activities are good for a deep relationship, but it is not necessary.
I think we should open everything and do not make a secret.
But, we don\'t need to do all together, such as a hobby.
Moreover, I believe when I have a healthy mental condition, I can make healthy love, not the tenacity of love or blind love.
So, it\'s important to keep my personal and family dreams and share my husband.
We can find a proper way to have a happy life.
And, another thing for marriage last longer is trusting each other.
I know that suspicion makes another new suspicion and the end of the way is distrust.
And I remember a famous talent\'s saying, \"every love is very similar\".
It means that no matter who I marry, my personality greatly affects my marriage.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
Truly, it takes effort for both partners to work on the marriage. I guess it is just easy to get married but maintaining the relationship is a challenge. Thank you for sharing this insight on marriage. Although I am not married, I know that all relationships need to be worked out in order to be strengthened.
-Rachel
Personal routine is very helpful for personal mental health and important for marriage last long.
>> Personal routine is very helpful for personal mental health and important for a long lasting marriage.
I thought I will do everything together with my husband if I getting married before I got married.
I thought I will do everything together with my husband if I getting married before I got married.
>> I thought I would do everything together with my husband if I get married with him when I was single.
However, I realized that doing together and sharing personal activities are good for a deep relationship, but it is not necessary.
However, I realized that doing together and sharing personal activities are good for a deep relationship, but it is not necessary.
>> correct
I think we should open everything and do not make a secret.
I think we should open everything and do not make a secret.
>> I think we should be open to each other about everything and should not keep secrets.
But, we don\'t need to do all together, such as a hobby.
But, we don\'t need to do all together, such as a hobby.
>> But we don\'t have to all things together such as doing our hobbies.
Moreover, I believe when I have a healthy mental condition, I can make healthy love, not the tenacity of love or blind love.
Moreover, I believe when I have a healthy mental condition, I can make healthy love, not the tenacity of love or blind love.
>> Moreover, if we have a healthy mind or mentality, we can have healthy relationships and not be forced to love.
So, it\'s important to keep my personal and family dreams and share my husband.
So, it\'s important to keep my personal and family dreams and share my husband.
>> So it\'s important to keep my personal and family dreams, but also to share them with my husband.
We can find a proper way to have a happy life.
We can find a proper way to have a happy life.
>> correct
And, another thing for marriage last longer is trusting each other.
And, another thing for marriage last longer is trusting each other.
>> And another thing that could make a marriage last longer is to trust each other.
I know that suspicion makes another new suspicion and the end of the way is distrust.
I know that suspicion makes another new suspicion and the end of the way is distrust.
>> I know that suspicion leads to another suspicion and the end result is distrust.
And I remember a famous talent\'s saying, \"every love is very similar\".
And I remember a famous talent\'s saying, \"every love is very similar\".
>> And I remember a famous saying from a talent (celebrity), \"All kinds of love are similar.
It means that no matter who I marry, my personality greatly affects my marriage.
It means that no matter who I marry, my personality greatly affects my marriage.
>> correct
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