5.2Homework

2014-05-02 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi there! Good morning! We have got a long holiday until Tuesday.We will be able to unwind. Have good days! Homework How should a person deal with bullying? We don't have to deal with bullying. I think bullying is really bad.We have to help them sincerely. In case of emergency, we should protect children,the old and infirm first. In order to this performance,we need to train since childhood continuously. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Hello there, Mr. [이름]! Enjoy yoru holidays. Have fun with your family. See you on Wednesday. ~KELLY~ Hi there! Good morning! >> Correct.We have got a long holiday until Tuesday. We will be able to unwind. Have good days!>> Correct.HomeworkHow should a person deal with bullying?We don\'t have to deal with bullying. >> Correct.I think bullying is really bad. We have to help them sincerely. >> Correct. In case of emergency, we should protect children, the old and infirm first. >> In case of en emergency, we should protect the children, the old and infirm first. In order to this performance,we need to train since childhood continuously.>> In order to do this, we need to train continously.Thank you! >> Correct.

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