5-2nd Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
The most thing I have to do in the office is to use the computer for a whole day.
When I use the computer, I type the documents and I use the mouse.
Sometimes, I sit on the chair to make the documents using the mouse and the keyboard.
Sometimes, I work in the laboratory to test some material for a whole day.
After testing, I have to leave the result and the procedure.
At that time, my wrist, especially on right, has suffered from twisting.
If there are the keyboard or the mouse front of you, and type and use these.
When you use it, your wrist would be twisted.
For a short time, the twisting is not dangerous but if you suffer from twisting your wrist, you would get the pain of the wrist.
Unfortunately, I have suffered from the pain.
It makes me to be hard to work in the office, when I make the documents.
So, I changed the keyboard and the mouse.
The reason why I postponed the composition after finishing the class.
Of course, I went to see a doctor but I have still the pain.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]! :)
How are you doing today?
I hope your wrist is feeling better.
I also feel pain on my wrist when I am overworked.
I use my hands at work and I also use them for my chores and crafts at home.
Anyhow, let\'s take good care of our hands because they are our source of bread and butter.
I hope you\'re having a great day.
See you tomorrow.
~Teacher C[이름]
The most thing I have to do in the office is to use the computer for a whole day.>> The most common thing that I have to do in the office is to use the computer for a/the whole day.
When I use the computer, I type the documents and I use the mouse.
When I use the computer, I type the documents and I use the mouse.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I type the documents and I use the mouse when I use the computer.
Sometimes, I sit on the chair to make the documents using the mouse and the keyboard.
Sometimes, I sit on the chair to make the documents using the mouse and the keyboard.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I sometimes sit on the chair to make the documents using the mouse and the keyboard.
Sometimes, I work in the laboratory to test some material for a whole day.
Sometimes, I work in the laboratory to test some material for a whole day.
>> Sometimes, I work in the laboratory to test some materials for a/the whole day.
After testing, I have to leave the result and the procedure.
After testing, I have to leave the result and the procedure.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I have to leave the result and the procedure after testing.
At that time, my wrist, especially on right, has suffered from twisting.
At that time, my wrist, especially on right, has suffered from twisting.
>> At that time, my wrists, especially on the right, has suffered from twisting.
If there are the keyboard or the mouse front of you, and type and use these.
If there are the keyboard or the mouse front of you, and type and use these.
>> [Do you mean]: This happens when you have a keyboard or a mouse in front of you and use them to type these.
When you use it, your wrist would be twisted.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Your wrist would be twisted when you use it.
For a short time, the twisting is not dangerous but if you suffer from twisting your wrist, you would get the pain of the wrist.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> If it is not prolonged, the twisting is not dangerous but if you suffer from twisting your wrist, you would get the pain of the wrist.
Unfortunately, I have suffered from the pain.
Unfortunately, I have suffered from the pain.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I have unfortunately suffered from the pain.
It makes me to be hard to work in the office, when I make the documents.
It makes me to be hard to work in the office, when I make the documents.
>> It gives me a hard time at work when I make the documents.
So, I changed the keyboard and the mouse.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> That\'s why I changed the keyboard and the mouse.
The reason why I postponed the composition after finishing the class.
The reason why I postponed the composition after finishing the class.
>> This is the reason why I postponed making a composition after finishing the class.
Of course, I went to see a doctor but I have still the pain.
Of course, I went to see a doctor but I have still the pain.
>> Of course, I went to a doctor but I still have pain.
OR >> Of course, I saw a doctor but I am still in pain.
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