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In my opinion, the soccer playing need to strong power and stamina.
But the women usually have weak power than men.
For this reason, men usually like soccer playing than women.
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In my opinion, the soccer playing need to strong power and stamina.
>> In my opinion, soccer payers must have great strength and stamina.
But the women usually have weak power than men.
But the women usually have weak power than men.
>> However, women typically have less power than men.
For this reason, men usually like soccer playing than women.
For this reason, men usually like soccer playing than women.
>> For this reason, men like playing soccer more than women.
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