5/30 HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
What do you think you will be doing five years from now?
Maybe i'm doing the same thing.
Also, I want to keep doing this business.
Where do you think you'll be living five years from now?
I have seen thought, i wanted to live in a foreign country after 10 years with my wife.
Maybe i will go to Vietnam or the Philippines.
I like warm contry.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon Sir [이름]! Thanks for your answer.
I hope that you will achieve your dream.
I also like to live in other country like in Canada.
Talk to you again tomorrow! ^^
~~Teacher May~~
Maybe i\'m doing the same thing.
>> Maybe I will do the same thing.
lso, I want to keep doing this business.
>> CORRECT
OR >> Also, I want to continue running this business.
I have seen thought, i wanted to live in a foreign country after 10 years with my wife.
>> I am thinking of living in a foreign country with my family after 10 years.
Maybe i will go to Vietnam or the Philippines.
>> CORRECT
I like warm contry.
>> I like warm countries.
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