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What is the difference between true and temporary happiness?
I think that true happiness is a sense of achivement.
>> Correct >> achievement
It has power of growing and self-satisfied life.
>> It has the power to grow and satisfy life.
By contrast, temporary happiness is relative happiness which it is compare to other person.
>> On the contrary, temporary happiness is comparing your life to others.
For example car, house, body figure and so on. . . .
>>Correct
Temporary happiness get happiness for compare it.
>> Temporary happiness is when you are happy in comparing your life to others.
(\'I taller than you, I have money more than him\'. )
So True happiness is not compare to others and a self-developed life.
>> So True happiness is not comparing yourself to others and a self-developed life.
That is the make \'today better than yesterday\'.
>> It is to make today better than yesterday.
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