5.30 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. to a great extent
2. in good health
3. pounding hard
4. to a large extent
5. reaction
1. There are some erreor to a great extents or small extents but i agree that to a great extent.
2. I started to go on a diet in order to be in good health. In a few day, i fell short because of my laziness.
3. I finally accepted into the college i wanted. When i saw an acceptance posting, i felt that my heart was pounding hard.
4. The cost of new phones are increasing yearly to a large extent.
5. I can\'t wait to go on vacation together this summer. And my friend\'s reaction also looked exciting.
강사 첨삭
Hello!^^
Thank you for sending your homework. I hope you study the corrections carefully.
Cheers!
Jean
1. to a great extent
2. in good health
3. pounding hard
4. to a large extent
5. reaction
1. There are some erreor to a great extents or small extents but i agree that to a great extent.
>> There are some errors to a great extent.
2. I started to go on a diet in order to be in good health. In a few day, i fell short because of my laziness.
>> I started to go on a diet in order to be in good health. After a few days, i fell short of the mark because of my laziness.
3. I finally accepted into the college i wanted. When i saw an acceptance posting, i felt that my heart was pounding hard.
>> I was finally accepted into the college I wanted. When I saw the acceptance posting, I could feel my heart pounding hard.
4. The cost of new phones are increasing yearly to a large extent.
>> correct
5. I can\'t wait to go on vacation together this summer. And my friend\'s reaction also looked exciting.
>> I can\'t wait to go on vacation together with my friends this summer, and I can tell from their reaction that they are excited.
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