5/31 homework

Hi [이름]! ^^

Thank you for sharing me about what you believe in.

I think, it is really important for us to have something we believe in.

It gives us hope and see our lives in a more creative and beautiful way. :)

Observe the corrected sentences I provided below. :)

See you! ^^

Teacher Glenda

Here are my corrections:
My answer: Santa Claus
I will always belive in Santa Claus, because I belive Santa Claus live in our world.

>> I will always believe in Santa Claus because I believe that he lives in this world.

And Santa Claus give a gift when people are sleeping. Finaliy, when I know who give to me a present,I am so happy.

>> And Santa Claus gives gifts when people are sleeping. Finally, when I knew who gave me a present, I am so happy.