5-31th Homework

Hi, [이름]!

This is a great essay. Thank you for writing it! ^^

I\'ve realized that planning is a very effective way to achieve your goals.

In addition to that, you should always have a back-up plan when things don\'t go your way.

I guess that\'s the secret of really successful people.

They have a direction and they know where they\'re going because they have a goal or a vision.

Anyhow, I hope you\'re doing great.

See you tomorrow. :)

~Teacher C[이름]

To persuade someone is a difficult thing when we want to get something through it.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Persuading someone is a difficult thing when we want to benefit through it.
We must have a confidence of thing we want to do.

>> We must have a confidence to do the thing that we want to do.
Even if we have it, we have to speak it out logically and rationally.

>> Even if we have the idea, we have to speak it out logically and rationally.
Sometimes, we may need an emotional speaking in order to closely reach an opponent.

>> Sometimes, we may need an emotional way of speaking in order to closely reach an opponent.
If we want to make it as a document, the content must have a proper reason why we have to do it.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> If we want to come up with a document, the content must have a proper reason why we have to do it.
So, when we write out, there are some logical issues, some reasons an lastly there are some proposals to solve the problems.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> When we do a write-up, there are some logical issues, some reasons and lastly there are some proposals to solve the problems.
The arrangement of the content would be important to persuade someone.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> It is important to have a good arrangement of the content in order to persuade someone.
In my case, to logically and rationally describe the reason as some documents is not easy.

>> In my case, to logically and rationally describe the reason to some documents are not easy.
Although I always have to do in my job, it is not easy.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> It is not easy although I always have to do in my job, .
Whenever I make some documents about some problems, I feel the hardness when I write an introduction.

>> Whenever I make some documents about some problems, I feel the difficulty when I write an introduction.
Even if I know the problem in some tasks, to efficiently show it to someone in character is a pain to me sometimes.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> It is a pain in the neck for me sometimes to efficiently show it to someone in character even if I know what\'s wrong in that task.
I think my brain may be not logical.

>> I think my brain may not be logical.