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2013-07-08 · 첨삭 강사 Isabel

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Today, Speaking English is very hard to me. I don't think of words, grammers, etc. also, I don't listening clearly your speaking. I was so embarrassed and felt disappointment. HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: topic: WHOLE or ALL? Fill in each blank space with the correct response. 1. I've been waiting for you my __whole_____ life. 2. __ All_____ my life I've been waiting for you. 3. The storm destroyed ___all____ neighborhoods of the city. 4. She spent _the whole _ day with her new boyfriend. 5. The _whole__ time she was in France, she never bought a baguette. 6. He thinks that __all_____ the people in this city are poor. 7. ___The whole____ town was destroyed by the tornado. 8. I can't believe I ate __the whole_____ salad. 9. I can't believe that I ate __all the_____ strawberries. 10. I've traveled across _all of______ Germany.

강사 첨삭

Hello there my dear sister! :) Don\'t be embarassed, it\'s totally fine, okay? Me? I also commit mistakes in grammar or pronunciation. So, don\'t feel bad, okay? :) Our imperfection will push us to strive for the best. We just have to learn from our mistakes, okay? Anyway, you did a great job with your composition! :) See, you\'re still doing great! :) I will talk to you tomorrow my dear! :) Enjoy the rest of the night! :) Always, T. Isabel :) Today, Speaking English is very hard to me.>>Today, speaking in English is very hard for me. >>OR: Today, it\'s very hard for me to speak in English. I don\'t think of words, grammers, etc. >>I didn\'t think about the words, grammar, etc.also, I don\'t listening clearly your speaking. >>I also didn\'t listen clearly to you. >>OR: I also didn\'t listen carefully to what you\'re saying.I was so embarrassed and felt disappointment.>>I was so embarrassed and I felt disappointment. >>I was so embarrassed and disappointed.HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:topic: WHOLE or ALL?Fill in each blank space with the correct response.1. I\'ve been waiting for you my __whole_____ life. >>Correct!2. __ All_____ my life I\'ve been waiting for you. >>Correct!3. The storm destroyed ___all____ neighborhoods of the city. >>whole4. She spent _the whole _ day with her new boyfriend. >>Correct!5. The _whole__ time she was in France, she never bought a baguette. >>Correct!6. He thinks that __all_____ the people in this city are poor. >>Correct!7. ___The whole____ town was destroyed by the tornado. >>Correct!8. I can\'t believe I ate __the whole_____ salad. >>Correct!9. I can\'t believe that I ate __all the_____ strawberries.>>Correct!10. I\'ve traveled across _all of______ Germany. >>Correct!

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