5-33th Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What can I do something for me everyday?
What can I don't anything for me everyday?
Which is it best for me?
We usually do something without consciousness everyday.
So, after doing something, we often didn't remember what we did do.
To remember it, we often write down the schedule on a memo.
But we forget the fact that we wrote the schedule on the memo.
Even if we remember the behavior, we forget where the memo is.
We are getting old, it would be deteriorate.
For our future, what is the best thing for us.
There are many things but I select studying English.
When I studied English for the first time, it was difficult and boring.
And I could not understand the structure of English.
Of course, I has studied it but I don't still know it fully.
That's why I study English.
Nowadays, I try to understand the language and the culture.
When I was young, I evaluated the culture as good or bad.
It's very foolish, I think.
The culture is not the reference whether it is good or bad.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
This is one of your best essays so far. ^_^
Thank you for coming up with good sentences.
Thank you for coming up with good sentences.
I think we should just do what makes us happy everyday.
It doesn\'t need to be grand or big.
You just need to do something that fulfills you on a daily basis.
Anyhow, I hope your doing great.
I\'ll see you again tomorrow.
~Teacher C[이름] :)
What can I do something for me everyday?>> What can I do for myself everyday?
What can I don\'t anything for me everyday?
What can I don\'t anything for me everyday?
>> [Do you mean]: What are the things that I shouldn\'t do for myself everyday?
Which is it best for me?
Which is it best for me?
>> Which is better for me?
We usually do something without consciousness everyday.
We usually do something without consciousness everyday.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> We usually do something unconsciously everyday.
So, after doing something, we often didn\'t remember what we did do.
So, after doing something, we often didn\'t remember what we did do.
>> So, after doing something, we often didn\'t remember what we did.
To remember it, we often write down the schedule on a memo.
To remember it, we often write down the schedule on a memo.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> We often write down the schedule on a memo to remember it.
But we forget the fact that we wrote the schedule on the memo.
But we forget the fact that we wrote the schedule on the memo.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> But we fail to remember that we wrote the schedule on the memo.
Even if we remember the behavior, we forget where the memo is.
Even if we remember the behavior, we forget where the memo is.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> We forget where the memo is even if we remember the behavior.
We are getting old, it would be deteriorate.
>> We are getting old and our body would deteriorate.
For our future, what is the best thing for us.
For our future, what is the best thing for us.
>> For our future, what is the best thing for us?
There are many things but I select studying English.
There are many things but I select studying English.
>> There are many things to do but I selected studying English.
When I studied English for the first time, it was difficult and boring.
When I studied English for the first time, it was difficult and boring.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> It was difficult and boring when I studied English for the first time.
And I could not understand the structure of English.
>> In addition, I could not understand the structure of English.
Of course, I has studied it but I don\'t still know it fully.
Of course, I has studied it but I don\'t still know it fully.
>> Of course, I have studied it but I don\'t still know it fully.
That\'s why I study English.
That\'s why I study English.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> That\'s the reason why I study English.
Nowadays, I try to understand the language and the culture.
Nowadays, I try to understand the language and the culture.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I try to understand the language and the culture nowadays.
When I was young, I evaluated the culture as good or bad.
When I was young, I evaluated the culture as good or bad.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> When I was young, I evaluated the culture as either good or bad.
It\'s very foolish, I think.
It\'s very foolish, I think.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I think it\'s quite foolish.
The culture is not the reference whether it is good or bad.
The culture is not the reference whether it is good or bad.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> The culture will not tell us whether it is good or bad.
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