5-34th Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
It's very cold, today.
I have to go to a business trip in a week.
The trip is for presenting my paper in English.
The time that is given to me is about 15 minutes, it's very short.
When I gave a presentation in English for the first time, it seemed to be very long.
So, after presenting I felt tired.
I'm not sure what I feel after finishing it.
But I have been studying English for two years in speaking, writing.
In order to get some rewards from my efforts, I will prepare it well.
And I will slowly speak at the conference room in order to well send my message and to understand my words myself.
Sometimes, I fast spoke even if I could not well do it.
In my deep mind, I want to show my ability and I want not to be shown as a beginner.
As a result, I speedy speak even if there are many errors.
After doing that, I am always disappointed myself.
Anyway, doing well is always good but it will take a long time.
So, we have to wait patiently as doing something.
That is a correct answer.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for taking the time to write an essay.
I just want to tell you that you\'ve already come a long way in studying English and I am proud of your improvement.
I sincerely hope all of your efforts would pay off in that conference.
I believe in you. I believe that you can do it.
Prepare well and break a leg! :)
I hope you\'re having a great day.
See you again next week.
I hope you\'re having a great day.
See you again next week.
~Teacher C[이름]
It\'s very cold, today.>> It\'s very cold today.
I have to go to a business trip in a week.
I have to go to a business trip in a week.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I have to go to a business trip a week after.
The trip is for presenting my paper in English.
The trip is for presenting my paper in English.
>> The trip is for the presentation of my paper in English.
The time that is given to me is about 15 minutes, it\'s very short.
The time that is given to me is about 15 minutes, it\'s very short.
>> The time that is given to me is about 15 minutes. It\'s very short.
When I gave a presentation in English for the first time, it seemed to be very long.
When I gave a presentation in English for the first time, it seemed to be very long.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> When I gave a presentation in English for the first time, it seemed to go on forever.
So, after presenting I felt tired.
So, after presenting I felt tired.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> So, after the presentation, I felt tired.
I\'m not sure what I feel after finishing it.
I\'m not sure what I feel after finishing it.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I don\'t know what to feel after finishing it.
But I have been studying English for two years in speaking, writing.
But I have been studying English for two years in speaking, writing.
>> But I have been studying how to speak and write in English for two years.
In order to get some rewards from my efforts, I will prepare it well.
In order to get some rewards from my efforts, I will prepare it well.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> In order to get some rewards for my efforts, I will prepare well.
And I will slowly speak at the conference room in order to well send my message and to understand my words myself.
And I will slowly speak at the conference room in order to well send my message and to understand my words myself.
>> [Do you mean]: I will also slowly speak at the conference room in order to send/convey my message well to the audience.
Sometimes, I fast spoke even if I could not well do it.
>> Sometimes, I speak fast even if I could not do it well.
In my deep mind, I want to show my ability and I want not to be shown as a beginner.
In my deep mind, I want to show my ability and I want not to be shown as a beginner.
>> In my mind, I want to show my ability to speak well and not look like a beginner.
As a result, I speedy speak even if there are many errors.
As a result, I speedy speak even if there are many errors.
>> As a result, I spoke fast even if there were many errors.
After doing that, I am always disappointed myself.
After doing that, I am always disappointed myself.
>> After doing that, I am always disappointed with myself.
Anyway, doing well is always good but it will take a long time.
Anyway, doing well is always good but it will take a long time.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Anyway, doing great is always good but it will take a some time.
So, we have to wait patiently as doing something.
So, we have to wait patiently as doing something.
>> So, we have to wait patiently in doing something.
That is a correct answer.
That is a correct answer.
>> CORRECT!
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