5-36th Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Could you explain a problem to a kid well?
The problem would be a mathematics or a physics.
Before asking me the problem, I thought that I could well explain it to the kid.
And I have explained the problem to the kid well.
However, it was not always that I could do well.
The question's area that my kids ask me is very wide so that I don't know how to explain it.
At that time, I frankly said that I don't know.
Nowadays, we can find the solution or the answer in the internet that I don't know using a mobile device.
We can even do anywhere, anytime, if we have the device on my hand.
It is very easy way to find and solve something.
But there are some faults using the mobile device.
From someday, we haven't read books and we haven't seen each other when we even sit on the same table.
We just see the mobile device even though we already read some articles.
It seems like a habit and it seems to be addicted.
In my case, I even know that but it is not easy to stop doing it.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]! ^_^
How are you doing so far?
How are you doing so far?
Thank you for taking the time to write an essay.
I think smart phones are very useful when they\'re used the right way.
However, when they are misused, the effect could be bad or even disastrous.
That\'s why we should be careful in using it.
Anyhow, I hope you\'re doing great.
See you in class tomorrow.
See you in class tomorrow.
~Teacher C[이름]
Could you explain a problem to a kid well?>> CORRECT!
OR >> Do you know how to explain a problem to a kid well?
The problem would be a mathematics or a physics.
The problem would be a mathematics or a physics.
>> The problem would be related to mathematics or physics.
Before asking me the problem, I thought that I could well explain it to the kid.
Before asking me the problem, I thought that I could well explain it to the kid.
>> Before asking me the problem, I thought that I could explain it well to the kid.
And I have explained the problem to the kid well.
And I have explained the problem to the kid well.
>> I also explained the problem to the kid well.
However, it was not always that I could do well.
However, it was not always that I could do well.
>> However, I don\'t always do it that well.
The question\'s area that my kids ask me is very wide so that I don\'t know how to explain it.
The question\'s area that my kids ask me is very wide so that I don\'t know how to explain it.
>> The question\'s area that my kids ask me is very wide so I don\'t know how to explain it.
At that time, I frankly said that I don\'t know.
At that time, I frankly said that I don\'t know.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> At that time, I told him the truth and said that I don\'t know the answer.
Nowadays, we can find the solution or the answer in the internet that I don\'t know using a mobile device.
Nowadays, we can find the solution or the answer in the internet that I don\'t know using a mobile device.
>> Nowadays, we can find the solution or the answer in the internet using a mobile device.
We can even do anywhere, anytime, if we have the device on my hand.
>> We can even do it anywhere and anytime if we have the device.
It is very easy way to find and solve something.
It is very easy way to find and solve something.
>> It is a very easy way to find and solve something.
But there are some faults using the mobile device.
But there are some faults using the mobile device.
>> But there are some faults when using the mobile device.
From someday, we haven\'t read books and we haven\'t seen each other when we even sit on the same table.
From someday, we haven\'t read books and we haven\'t seen each other when we even sit on the same table.
>> Some days, we fail to read books and we fail to see each other even if we are sitting on the same table.
We just see the mobile device even though we already read some articles.
We just see the mobile device even though we already read some articles.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Our full attention is on the mobile device even though we already read some articles.
It seems like a habit and it seems to be addicted.
It seems like a habit and it seems to be addicted.
>> It seems like a habit and it seems to be addictive.
In my case, I even know that but it is not easy to stop doing it.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> In my case, I am aware of it but it is not easy to stop doing it.
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