5-37th Homework

Hello there [이름]! ^_^

Thank you for writing this essay.

I actually don\'t drink coffee because it\'s not good for me.

But I agree that black coffee is the best kind of coffee because it is full of antioxidants.

However, drinking too much coffee is not good because it contains too much caffeine.

Anyhow, take it easy on drinking coffee especially the coffee stick.

I hope you\'re doing great.

See you tomorrow.

~Teacher C[이름] :)

How many a cup of coffee drink you for a day?

>> How many cups of coffee do you drink in/for a day?
According to a report, a cup of coffee for a day is very healthful for you.

>> According to a report, a cup of coffee a day is very healthful for you.
It would be a black coffee.

>> The best coffee would be black coffee.
In Korea, many people love the coffee and enjoy it.

>> In Korea, many people love coffee and enjoy it.
The stick coffee that compose of sugar, coffee and cream was invented by a company in Korea.

>> The stick coffee made of sugar, coffee and cream was invented by a company in Korea.
Although many people enjoyed the black coffee, some people love the stick coffee.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Even though many people enjoy drinking black coffee, some people also love the stick coffee.
It\'s because of its sweet and convenience.

>> It\'s because it\'s sweet and convenient to prepare.
But there are some faults for us to enjoy the stick coffee.

>> But there are some faults in enjoying the stick coffee.
It is the calorie of the sugar and the cream in the stick coffee.

>> The calorie from the sugar and the cream in the stick coffee is not good.
The person who loves the stick coffee may drink about five cups of coffee for a day.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> A person who is into stick coffee may consume up to five cups of coffee for a day.
The coffee without the sugar and the cream is healthful but many stick coffees may be not good for your body.

>> The coffee without sugar and cream is healthful but many stick coffees may be not good for your body.
We already have some sugar through the food.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> We already get sugar from food.
In this era, we live in the plethora of the food except for Africa.

>> In this era, we live in a plethora of food except for Africa.
Whenever I went to a business trip abroad, I felt that there were many fat people.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Whenever I go on a business trip abroad, I feel that there are too many fat people.
And they also have a lot of food at once.

>> In addition, they also consume a lot of food at once.