5-39th Homework

2018-01-05 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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My colleague bought new car that was made in Germany. In Korea, there are several car makers and we can easily select one of them that they manufacture. That's why we usually buy the car that was made in Korea when we want to change or buy it. Additionally, the imported cars are generally more expensive than domestic cars. However, the car market in Korea is very large so that the foreign car companies do the aggressive marketing. We could not easily see the imported car in the road a decade year ago. Recently, it is not a rare situation any more. There are also cheap imported cars that we can afford. But they are still expensive and if we buy it, there are several costs to support it. In the case of the imported car, the car's parts also have to be imported if the owner wants to change into the original part. The part's price is also expensive in Korea. But there is no reason why the parts are expensive. Many people try to solve this problem but it isn't solved yet.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!

I\'ve always wanted to buy a new car but I can\'t afford it. Hahaha! 

Anyway, I know one day I would have one. 

I just need to be patient and persevering. 

Imported cars are expensive because of their brand. 

In any product, it\'s really not the product itself that you are buying but the brand or the name. 

That\'s how it is in business.

Anyhow, I hope you\'re doing great.

See you again on Tuesday.

~Teacher C[이름] 

My colleague bought new car that was made in Germany.

>> My colleague bought a new car that was made in Germany.
In Korea, there are several car makers and we can easily select one of them that they manufacture.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> There are several car makers in Korea and we can easily select one of them that they manufacture.
That\'s why we usually buy the car that was made in Korea when we want to change or buy it.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> That\'s the reason why we usually buy the car that was made in Korea when we want to change or buy it.
Additionally, the imported cars are generally more expensive than domestic cars.

>> Additionally, the imported cars are generally more expensive than the domestic cars.
However, the car market in Korea is very large so that the foreign car companies do the aggressive marketing.

>> However, the car market in Korea is very large so that is why the foreign car companies do the aggressive marketing.
We could not easily see the imported car in the road a decade year ago.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> A decade ago, we could not easily see the imported car in the road.
Recently, it is not a rare situation any more.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> But nowadays, it is not a rare situation any more.
There are also cheap imported cars that we can afford.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> There are also affordable imported cars out here.
But they are still expensive and if we buy it, there are several costs to support it.

>> [Do you mean]: But they are still expensive and if we buy it, there are still a lot of expenses to maintain it.
In the case of the imported car, the car\'s parts also have to be imported if the owner wants to change into the original part.

>> In the case of the imported car, the car\'s parts also have to be imported if the owner wants to change the original part.
The part\'s price is also expensive in Korea.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> The spare part is also expensive in Korea.
But there is no reason why the parts are expensive.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> But there is no reason for the parts to be expensive.
Many people try to solve this problem but it isn\'t solved yet.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Many people try to solve this problem but it is still unresolved. 

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