5.4 Homework

2015-05-04 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi there! Good morning! The weather is nice, so we can really enjoy our time outside. I hope you also enjoy your time in such a fine weather. Does your country have parades during holidays? Have you ever been to a oarade? No, our country haven't parades during last holidy. I have never been to a parade yet. There are not much parades in Korea. I think that it seems to be a weakness in our culture in Korea. I can watch some parades on TV in foreign countries. I envy that culture. Thank you.

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Hi there MR. [이름]! Enjoy the perfect weather today. Anyway, thank you for your homework. Happy holiday!~Kelly^^ Hi there! Good morning! >> Correct. The weather is nice, so we can really enjoy our time outside. >> Correct. I hope you also enjoy your time in such a fine weather. >> Correct.Does your country have parades during holidays? Have you ever been to a oarade?No, our country haven\'t parades during last holidy. >> No, our country don\'t have parades during holidays. I have never been to a parade yet. >> Correct. There are not much parades in Korea. >> There are not many parades in Korea. I think that it seems to be a weakness in our culture in Korea. I can watch some parades on TV in foreign countries. >> I can watch some parades of other countries on TV. I envy that culture. >> Correct.Thank you. >> Correct.  

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