5.4 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! Good morning!
The weather is nice, so we can really enjoy our time outside.
I hope you also enjoy your time in such a fine weather.
Does your country have parades during holidays?
Have you ever been to a oarade?
No, our country haven't parades during last holidy. I have never been to a parade yet. There are not much parades in Korea. I think that it seems to be a weakness in our culture in Korea. I can watch some parades on TV in foreign countries. I envy that culture.
Thank you.
강사 첨삭
Hi there MR. [이름]!
Enjoy the perfect weather today. Anyway, thank you for your homework.
Happy holiday!~Kelly^^
Hi there! Good morning!
>> Correct.
The weather is nice, so we can really enjoy our time outside.
>> Correct.
I hope you also enjoy your time in such a fine weather.
>> Correct.Does your country have parades during holidays? Have you ever been to a oarade?No, our country haven\'t parades during last holidy.
>> No, our country don\'t have parades during holidays.
I have never been to a parade yet.
>> Correct.
There are not much parades in Korea.
>> There are not many parades in Korea.
I think that it seems to be a weakness in our culture in Korea.
I can watch some parades on TV in foreign countries.
>> I can watch some parades of other countries on TV.
I envy that culture.
>> Correct.Thank you.
>> Correct.
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