5.4 homework!

2018-05-09 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

학생이 쓴 원문

[Homework] 1) Mount Everest is_the most highest of mountians in the world_. 2) Yesterday evening _I met friends so I had a dinner_. 3) At the moment_I lost memories_. 4) We enjoyed our holyday in Spain_which the beautiful place_. 5) We were really hungry_so ate hurriedly the foods_. 6) The famous book \"David Copperfield\"_is very interesting that I want to introduce with my friends_. 7) I was watching TV_in all night long so now I am very tire_. 8) Peter is very friendly and everybody_him to like_. 9) I can\'t come with you because_you hurt legs so you need to cure_.

강사 첨삭

[Homework]
1) Mount Everest is_the most highest of mountians in the world_.
>> the highest mountain in the world.
2) Yesterday evening _I met friends so I had a dinner_.
>> I met with my friends and had a dinner.

3) At the moment_I lost memories_.
>> I lost my memories.
Or
>> At the moment, I\'m studying hard.

4) We enjoyed our holyday in Spain_which the beautiful place_.
>> which is a beautiful place.
Or
>> We enjoyed our holiday in Spain although the weather wasn\'t good.

5) We were really hungry_so ate hurriedly the foods_.
>> so I hurriedly ate the food.
Or
>> We were so hungry so we went to eat in a restaurant.

6) The famous book \"David Copperfield\"_is very interesting that I want to introduce with my friends_.
>> is very interesting that I recommended it to my friends.
7) I was watching TV_in all night long so now I am very tire_.
>> all night long so, I\'m very tired.

8) Peter is very friendly and everybody_him to like_.
>> likes him.
9) I can\'t come with you because_you hurt legs so you need to cure_
>> my leg hurts and I need it to get healed.

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