5-40th Homework

Hello there [이름]!

Thank you for writing this essay.

I want to have a pick-up truck someday.

I prefer an electric car or a hydrogen car because I am pro environment. ^_^
I hope the loophole in these cars will be solved soon.

Have a wonderful day.

See you on Tuesday!

~Teacher C[이름] :)

What kind of car do you like?

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Which car do you prefer to have?
There are many kinds of car in the world, electric car, diesel car and hydrogen car.

>> There are many kinds of cars in the world. There are electric cars, diesel cars and hydrogen cars.
In the case of the shape, there are sports car, offload car and sedan.

>> In the case of the shape, there are sports cars, offload cars and a sedan.
Personally, I like the hydrogen car that use a hydrogen gas or a hydrogen battery as its fuel.

>> Personally, I like the hydrogen car that uses a hydrogen gas or a hydrogen battery as its fuel.
Many car makers are developing the next generation car that can reduce the amount of the use of the fossil energy.

>> Many car makers are developing the next generation car that can reduce the amount of use of fossil energy.
The electric car is representative.

>> The electric car is the representative for it.
But it has also some problems to broadly use it like as current cars.

>> [Do you mean]: But it has also some problems and it has some limitations unlike the current cars. 

The first thing that we have to solve is the time of charging the battery in the car.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> The first thing that we need to solve is the time of charging the battery in the car.
The fast charging time is about 30 minutes fully.

>> The fastest fully charging time is about 30 minutes.
It is very long time if it compares with a gasoline car.

>> It is a very long time if we compare it with a car that uses gasoline.
Another thing is the charging station where the electric car\'s battery can be charged.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Another concern is the charging station where the electric car\'s battery can be charged.
In Korea, the station is very rare.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> The station is very rare in Korea.
In all over the world, the electric car\'s industry is slowly developing.

>> All over the world, the electric car\'s industry is slowly developing.
In the case of the hydrogen car, it is placed in the first step.

>> In the case of the hydrogen car, it is now on its first step.
In my case, I feel attractive on it.

>> In my case, I feel attracted to it.