5-42th Homework

2018-01-09 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

학생이 쓴 원문

Had you ever experienced a phishing through a phone or e-mail? Actually, I experienced the phishing through the phone but I wasn't deceived. Before receiving the call, I heard about the phishing fraud on some medias. However, when I got the call which seemed to be strange, I frightened at that time. But I already have some information about the phishing, I requested a phone number that I tried to call back. I could not remember the contents that the fraudster told. It may be about my account of the bank. In the case of requesting the phone number, the fraudster often hang up the phone since it was not true. But the fraudster said to me the phone number that I requested, as if it seemed to be true. After hang up the phone, I called back. Naturally, nobody received the call. Nowadays, the trick that the fraudster uses is attractive so that many young people also easily deceive. Many people who don't receive the phishing call easily say, "I will never deceive".

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]! :)
Fraud and scam are very common nowadays in my country.

Many people are easily deceived because of their enticing offers.

It\'s good to know that you are not so easy to deceive.

Anyhow, I hope you\'re doing great.

See you again on Thursday. :)
~Teacher C[이름]

Had you ever experienced a phishing through a phone or e-mail?

>> Have you ever experienced phishing through a phone or an e-mail?
Actually, I experienced the phishing through the phone but I wasn\'t deceived.

>> Actually, I experienced phishing through a phone but I wasn\'t deceived.
Before receiving the call, I heard about the phishing fraud on some medias.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Before receiving the call, I heard about the phishing fraud through the news.
However, when I got the call which seemed to be strange, I frightened at that time.

>> However, when I got the call which seemed to be strange, I got frightened.
But I already have some information about the phishing, I requested a phone number that I tried to call back.

>> But I already had some information about phishing so I requested a phone number to call back.
I could not remember the contents that the fraudster told.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I could not remember the information the fraudster mentioned.
It may be about my account of the bank.
>> It may be about my bank account.
In the case of requesting the phone number, the fraudster often hang up the phone since it was not true.

>> In the case of requesting for the phone number, the fraudster often hang up the phone since it was not true.
But the fraudster said to me the phone number that I requested, as if it seemed to be true.

>> But the fraudster gave me the phone number that I requested, as if it was true.
After hang up the phone, I called back.

>> After I hung up the phone, I called back.
Naturally, nobody received the call.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Naturally, the call was left unattended.
Nowadays, the trick that the fraudster uses is attractive so that many young people also easily deceive.

>> Nowadays, the trick that the fraudster uses is attractive so many young people also easily get deceived.
Many people who don\'t receive the phishing call easily say, \"I will never deceive\".

>> Many people who don\'t receive a phishing call easily say, \"I will never be deceived\".

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