5-43th Homework

Hi, [이름]! 

Thank you for writing this sentence. 

I disagree that money don\'t interest anyone. 

Actually, most people I know are interested in it. 

However, I think money is just a piece of paper and the real reason why people see it important is because of the value we have placed in it.

Because of the very high value we put to it, people equate money to power.

That\'s why people say that money is power.

Anyhow, that is just how I see money.

I hope you\'re doing great.

See you again on Thursday.

~Teacher C[이름] :)

When it comes to the money, nobody is interested in it.

>> When it comes to money, nobody is interested in it.
In the capitalism, the money is an ability and a power.

>> [Do you mean]: In capitalism, money signifies ability and power.
There is no mercy if there is related with the money.

>> There is no mercy if it is related with money.
To get the money, someone clandestinely make a project.

>> To get money, someone clandestinely makes a project.
It would be break the rules and it would be cheat someone.

>> It would be breaking the rules and it would be cheating someone.
After accomplishing it, they leave to another place where they can get the money through the cheat.

>> After accomplishing it, they go to another place where they can get money through cheating.
But losing your money is also your responsibility.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> But losing your money if also your fault.
So, when you contract with someone, you must be very careful even if he or she is already familiar with you.

>> So, when you make a contract with someone, you must be very careful even if he or she is already familiar with you.
Somebody say, \"don\'t set the money as your goal\".

>> Somebody says, \"don\'t make money as your goal\".
I don\'t agree with that.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I disagree to that statement.
People who said it would be a rich and they also said that they didn\'t pursue the money but they enjoyed it.

>> People who said it are rich and they also said that they didn\'t pursue money but they enjoyed it.
Nowadays, if you said like this, nobody agree with it.

>> Nowadays, if you say like this, nobody agrees with it.
The environment that they lived is different from that of young people.

>> The environment that they lived in is different from that of young people.
The balance of the capital was already broken and the tendency would become serious.

>> [Do you mean]: The balance in capitalism was already broken and the tendency to fail is serious.
To live without hardness, it is also difficult to us.

>> To live without difficulty is also difficult to us.