5-44th Homework

2018-01-10 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

학생이 쓴 원문

I practice the Pilates two times every week, Tuesday and Thursday. Since I have a little time before going to the Pilates, I'm writing the composition board with the Pilates. Actually, I started this activity 2 years ago. Until now, I have satisfied with it. The activity is taken place in the company every night and every morning. When I started it, I did it in the morning because I didn't want to omit it. In Korea company, there are many meeting in the evening in order to talk each other drinking some beers. If I do the activity after working time, I wouldn't exercise. However, I even determined the time as the morning, the reason why I had to change the time is always happened. The first reason is the phone English. In my case, I feel that the learning English is more important than the activity. The second reason is that if I do the phone English in the morning, I could get much time to prepare for the class. Until now, the schedule that I set is available.

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]!

I think Pilates is a very good form of exercise.

I am happy to know that you do your best to stay fit and healthy despite your very busy schedule.

Carry on! You are doing great!

I hope you\'re having a good day.

Stay warm and safe.
See you tomorrow.

~Teacher C[이름] :)

I practice the Pilates two times every week, Tuesday and Thursday.

>> I practice Pilates two times every week. It\'s on Tuesday and Thursday.
Since I have a little time before going to the Pilates, I\'m writing the composition board with the Pilates.

>> [Do you mean]: Since I have a little time left before going to Pilates class, I\'m writing a composition about it.
Actually, I started this activity 2 years ago.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I actually started this activity 2 years ago.
Until now, I have satisfied with it.

>> Until now, I am satisfied with it.
The activity is taken place in the company every night and every morning.

>> The activity takes place in the company every night and every morning.
When I started it, I did it in the morning because I didn\'t want to omit it.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> When I started it, I did it in the morning because I didn\'t want to remove it from my schedule.
In Korea company, there are many meeting in the evening in order to talk each other drinking some beers.

>> In Korean companies, evening meetings are common in order to talk to each other while drinking some beers.
If I do the activity after working time, I wouldn\'t exercise.

>> If I do the activity after working, I wouldn\'t exercise.
However, I even determined the time as the morning, the reason why I had to change the time is always happened.

>> [Do you mean]: However, I am determined to do it in the morning because changing time always happens.
The first reason is the phone English.

>> The first reason is the phone English class.
In my case, I feel that the learning English is more important than the activity.

>> In my case, I feel that learning English is more important than the activity.
The second reason is that if I do the phone English in the morning, I could get much time to prepare for the class.

>> The second reason is that if I do the phone English class in the morning, I could get much time to prepare for the class.
Until now, the schedule that I set is available.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> The schedule that I set is available until now.

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