5.5 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
> Friends are presents we give to ourselves. What do you think this phrase means?
The heartfelt caring and support, and laughing out loud for fun with friends keep us mentally and physically strong and improve the quality of our lives. Good friends enrich our lives in so many ways. Through a magical combination of similarities and differences, friends offer us the opportunity to know ourselves as we are and help us grow into who we want to be. This wonderful companions who offer us that perfect combination of comfort and stimulus to grow help us define and refine who we choose to be every day. So, friends are presents we give to ourselves.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]. Thank you for this. Very well said. Friends help us know ourselves better.
- T. Beth
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>>> OR: The heartfelt care and support, and laughing out loud for fun with friends keep us mentally and physically strong and improve the quality of our lives.
Good friends enrich our lives in so many ways.
>>> correct
Through a magical combination of similarities and differences, friends offer us the opportunity to know ourselves as we are and help us grow into who we want to be.
>>> correct
>>> OR: With the combination of similarities and differences, friends offer us the opportunity to know ourselves as we are and help us grow into who we want to be.
This wonderful companions who offer us that perfect combination of comfort and stimulus to grow help us define and refine who we choose to be every day.
>>> These wonderful companions who offer us that perfect combination of comfort and stimulus to grow help us define and refine who we choose to be every day.
So, friends are presents we give to ourselves.
>>> correct
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