5/5 HOMEWORK (TODAY IS CHILDREN\'S DAY🎆🎇✨🎉🎊)
학생이 쓴 원문
Today, I learned about fortune teller with Kelly teacher. Fortune teller tells what visiters want to know. But I don\'t believe what fortune teller tells because answers are superstition. I wonder why people go to fortune teller. I think it\'s because fortune teller tells positive answers. I think saving the money is better than going to fortune teller.
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Thank you for doing your homework, Zoe.
Kelly
Today, I learned about fortune teller with Kelly teacher. >> Today, I learned about fortune tellers with teacher Kelly.
Fortune teller tells what visiters want to know.
>> A fortune teller tells what her clients want to know.
But I don\'t believe what fortune teller tells because answers are superstition.
>> But I don\'t believe what a fortune teller tells because they are superstitions.
I wonder why people go to fortune teller. I think it\'s because fortune teller tells positive answers.
>> I wonder why people go to a fortune teller. I think it\'s because the fortune teller tells positive answers.
I think saving the money is better than going to fortune teller.
>> I think saving money is better than going to a fortune teller.
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