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My favorite food is fried chicken. In Korea when people eat it, they like to eat it with beer at night. Fried chicken is very popular food in Korea. We also can order a delivery it to our house with beer. I like the delivery system of Korea. However we have to be careful. After we ate a lot of chickens at night, we can get our weight. But I still do like to eat them at night.

Hi [이름]! ^^ Thank you for telling me about your favorite food. ^^ I love fried chicken as well, especially the famous \"fire chicken\" of Korea. ^^ Anyway, notice my corrections; by using compound sentences, you use less words so try to practice making longer sentences, okay? Also, remember, never start your sentences with the words \"but\", \"and\" and \"because\".   Good work all in all! You really hung in there and completed the assignment, great work today.   ==Teacher Bella==     My favorite food is fried chicken. >> CORRECT! In Korea when people eat it, they like to eat it with beer at night.Fried chicken is very popular food in Korea. >> Fried chicken is very popular in Korea and people here like to eat it with beer at night. We also can order a delivery it to our house with beer. >> We can also have it delivered to our house along with beer. I like the delivery system of Korea. >> CORRECTHowever we have to be careful.After we ate a lot of chickens at night, we can get our weight. >> However, we still have to be cautious since eating a lot of chicken at night might lead to weight gain. But I still do like to eat them at night. >> Although, I still like to eat fried chicken at night.