5-5th Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
It\'s afternoon again.
I hope you\'ve accomplished a lot today.
I think consistency is very important in achieving good results.
Nevertheless, it should be practiced with great perseverance.
See you again tomorrow.
~Teacher C[이름]
Whenenver you do anything, the consistency is important in order to get the confidence from others.
>> Whenever you do anything, the consistency is important in order to get the confidence from others.
Although the others are kids, it is important.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Even if the others are kids, it is important.
When my kids wera growing up, I heard the content relating with the consistency from a TV show.
>> When my kids were growing up, I heard the concept of consistency from a TV show.
In the TV show, the parents want to take their kids a specific rule.
>> In the TV show, the parents wanted to teach their kids a specific rule.
At that time, the parents have to keep their consistency.
>> At that time, the parents had to keep their consistency.
If they don\'t keep it consistently, kids would be complex.
>> If they don\'t stay consistent, the kids would have a hard time.
If you don\'t keep your decision on the same situation, your intention would not be transferred to others.
>> If you don\'t stay firm in a situation, your intention would not be transferred to others.
It\'s because there is no consistency to keep their rule.
>> It\'s because there is no consistency in keeping a rule.
It would not relate with the consistency of this article.
>> It would not be related with the consistency of this article.
The consistency we could predict is not a problem in the real life.
>> Consistency as we predict is not a problem in the real life.
But the thing we could not prediect is very dangerout, so many people want to find the consistency.
>> But the one thing that we could not prediect is danger, so many people want to find consistency.
If we predict something, we could prepare for it.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> If we are able to predict something, we could prepare for it.
If you are someone who has notan ability to predict, you could manage to do it.
>> If you are someone who does not have an ability to predict something, you could learn how to do it.
Whenevery you do, it would be very hard.
>> Whenever you do, it would be very hard.
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