5-5th Homework

2017-10-09 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

학생이 쓴 원문

Whenenver you do anything, the consistency is important in order to get the confidence from others. Although the others are kids, it is important. When my kids wera growing up, I heard the content relating with the consistency from a TV show. In the TV show, the parents want to take their kids a specific rule. At that time, the parents have to keep their consistency. If they don't keep it consistently, kids would be complex. If you don't keep your decision on the same situation, your intention would not be transferred to others. It's because there is no consistency to keep their rule. It would not relate with the consistency of this article. The consistency we could predict is not a problem in the real life. But the thing we could not prediect is very dangerout, so many people want to find the consistency. If we predict something, we could prepare for it. If you are someone who has notan ability to predict, you could manage to do it. Whenevery you do, it would be very hard.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!

It\'s afternoon again.

I hope you\'ve accomplished a lot today.

I think consistency is very important in achieving good results.

Nevertheless, it should be practiced with great perseverance.

See you again tomorrow.

~Teacher C[이름]

Whenenver you do anything, the consistency is important in order to get the confidence from others.

>> Whenever you do anything, the consistency is important in order to get the confidence from others.
Although the others are kids, it is important.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Even if the others are kids, it is important.
When my kids wera growing up, I heard the content relating with the consistency from a TV show.

>> When my kids were growing up, I heard the concept of consistency from a TV show.
In the TV show, the parents want to take their kids a specific rule.

>> In the TV show, the parents wanted to teach their kids a specific rule.
At that time, the parents have to keep their consistency.

>> At that time, the parents had to keep their consistency.
If they don\'t keep it consistently, kids would be complex.

>> If they don\'t stay consistent, the kids would have a hard time.
If you don\'t keep your decision on the same situation, your intention would not be transferred to others.

>> If you don\'t stay firm in a situation, your intention would not be transferred to others.
It\'s because there is no consistency to keep their rule.

>> It\'s because there is no consistency in keeping a rule.
It would not relate with the consistency of this article.

>> It would not be related with the consistency of this article.
The consistency we could predict is not a problem in the real life.

>> Consistency as we predict is not a problem in the real life.
But the thing we could not prediect is very dangerout, so many people want to find the consistency.

>> But the one thing that we could not prediect is danger, so many people want to find consistency.
If we predict something, we could prepare for it.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> If we are able to predict something, we could prepare for it.
If you are someone who has notan ability to predict, you could manage to do it.

>> If you are someone who does not have an ability to predict something, you could learn how to do it.

Whenevery you do, it would be very hard.

>> Whenever you do, it would be very hard.

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