5/6 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
[What are the three things that you don\'t like about yourself? Should you change them?]
I have some weaknesses myself, and I know well about that.
Firstly, I am very difficult to wake up early morning.
My mom said I was difficult to wake up in the whole of my life, even when I was kids.
I remember she said she was old to wake me up, hahaha.
I can keep my eyes open at the night or dawn and it is easier than getting up early in the morning.
Secondly, I have a habit to delay work what I feel heavy.
I think this is many caused by my mind that I want to do more perfectly.
I am trying to change this habit nowadays because often it is better to do less well soon.
Thirdly, I have a lot of worries.
I know the most worries will do not occur actually.
Sometimes it makes me passively.
I want to be a big man.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you for accomplishing your homework. I appreciate it a lot! ^ ^
Thank you for your thoughts on this one. I guess we have some things in common! ^ ^ But, we really do hope we can do something about it! ^ ^ You know what they say, it\'s just \"mind over matter\". ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
I have some weaknesses myself, and I know well about that.
>>I have some weaknesses, and I know well about that.
Firstly, I am very difficult to wake up early morning.
Firstly, I am very difficult to wake up early morning.
>>Firstly, I find it difficult to wake up early in the morning.
>>Firstly, it\'s difficult for people to wake me up early in the morning.
My mom said I was difficult to wake up in the whole of my life, even when I was kids.
>>My mom said it has been difficult for people to wake me up , even when I was a kid.
I remember she said she was old to wake me up, hahaha.
I remember she said she was old to wake me up, hahaha.
>>It\'s funny because I remember she said she got old waking me up.
I can keep my eyes open at the night or dawn and it is easier than getting up early in the morning.
I can keep my eyes open at the night or dawn and it is easier than getting up early in the morning.
>>I can keep my eyes open at night and it\'s a lot easier for me staying awake at night than getting up early in the morning.
Secondly, I have a habit to delay work what I feel heavy.
Secondly, I have a habit to delay work what I feel heavy.
>>Secondly, I have a habit of delaying my work especially when I\'m not in the mood.
I think this is many caused by my mind that I want to do more perfectly.
I think this is many caused by my mind that I want to do more perfectly.
>>I think this is because of me being a perfectionist.
I am trying to change this habit nowadays because often it is better to do less well soon.
I am trying to change this habit nowadays because often it is better to do less well soon.
>>I am trying to change this habit nowadays because it is often better to at least try to do something than none at all.
Thirdly, I have a lot of worries.
Thirdly, I have a lot of worries.
>>Correct
I know the most worries will do not occur actually.
I know the most worries will do not occur actually.
>>I know that sometimes we worry about things that will or don\'t actually happen.
Sometimes it makes me passively.
Sometimes it makes me passively.
>>Sometimes it makes me passive.
I want to be a big man.
I want to be a big man.
>>I wish I could be strong enough to change these habits and attitude.
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