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2015-08-28 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

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I live in Pyeongtaek city. I moved there 10 years ago. Near the house where I live are my company and some schools for my children. That is the resaon why I moved here too. I am living in the first floor of the apartment. It is quite a modern apartment. The total floor size is about 100 square meters. The apartment itself has wooden floors with under floor heating and most of the walls are simply wall-papered in light colors. It has 3 bedrooms, 2 bathrooms, a kitchen and a big living room. The bus station is located next to my apartment. There are also many stores around. I like this place very much because I feel comfort in it.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!   I love checking your homework. You are an outstanding student. Keep it up.   Teacher Venus^^   I live in Pyeongtaek city. >>>CORRECT I moved there 10 years ago.>>>CORRECT   Near the house where I live are my company and some schools for my children. >>>CORRECT That is the resaon why I moved here too. >>>CORRECT I am living in the first floor of the apartment. >>>CORRECT It is quite a modern apartment. >>>CORRECT The total floor size is about 100 square meters. >>>CORRECT The apartment itself has wooden floors with under floor heating and most of the walls are simply wall-papered in light colors. >>>CORRECT It has 3 bedrooms, 2 bathrooms, a kitchen and a big living room. >>>CORRECT The bus station is located next to my apartment. >>>CORRECT There are also many stores around. >>>CORRECT I like this place very much because I feel comfort in it. >>>CORRECT

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