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I live in Pyeongtaek city.
I moved there 10 years ago.
Near the house where I live are my company and some schools for my children.
That is the resaon why I moved here too.
I am living in the first floor of the apartment.
It is quite a modern apartment.
The total floor size is about 100 square meters.
The apartment itself has wooden floors with under floor heating and most of the walls are simply wall-papered in light colors.
It has 3 bedrooms, 2 bathrooms, a kitchen and a big living room.
The bus station is located next to my apartment.
There are also many stores around.
I like this place very much because I feel comfort in it.
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I live in Pyeongtaek city.
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I moved there 10 years ago.>>>CORRECT
Near the house where I live are my company and some schools for my children.
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That is the resaon why I moved here too.
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I am living in the first floor of the apartment.
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It is quite a modern apartment.
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The total floor size is about 100 square meters.
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The apartment itself has wooden floors with under floor heating and most of the walls are simply wall-papered in light colors.
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It has 3 bedrooms, 2 bathrooms, a kitchen and a big living room.
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The bus station is located next to my apartment.
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There are also many stores around.
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I like this place very much because I feel comfort in it.
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