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2016-09-01 · 첨삭 강사 Lisa

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What kind of music you you like? I like hip-hop and ballads. Who are your favorite artists? My favorite artists are jessi and B.T.S What are your favorite songs? My favorite songs title is 'No love' Discuss how music has changed since the year 1900. I can not interpret this sentence.

강사 첨삭

H-E-L-L-O there [이름]!  I didn\'t know that you like hip-hop and ballad music. Hmmm.. I like hip-hop too because it makes me dance! hihihi! Anyway, I observed that you are using the articles \"the\" and \"a\" correctly. Good job! Keep using it in your sentences. Very good! Keep up the good work! I\'ll see you in our class!   What kind of music you you like? I like hip-hop and ballads. >>> OR YOU CAN SAY: I like hip-hop and ballad music.Who are your favorite artists?My favorite artists are jessi and B.T.S >>> CORRECT. OR: My favorite artists would be Jessie and the group B.T.S.What are your favorite songs?My favorite songs title is \'No love\'>>> My favorite song would be \"No love\" by Jessie. Discuss how music has changed since the year 1900.I can not interpret this sentence. >>> I cannot understand this question. >>> This sentence is asking you to explain what is the difference of today\'s music (year 2016) from the music of the year 1900. Or it is asking you to compare the 2016 music to 1900 music. ^.^

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