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Hi there Ms. [이름],

You are an amazing student Ms. [이름] so you don\'t have to envy me. You did a great job in this composition. Most of your sentences are correct! You are incredible, keep it up! See you tomorrow!

Take care!

~T. Lynn

I agree.

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Teaching is one of the most fascinating jobs.

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When I was a elementary school student, I would want to be a teacher.

>> When I was an elementary school student, I wanted to be a teacher.
Because teaching is important in our lives like learning.

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In my opinion, all teachers have to try learning and studying for their students.

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That is reasons why I think teaching is fascinating jobs.

>> That is the reason why I think teaching is a fascinating job.
I want to learn about a lot of things in my life.

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So I really envy you.

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And I want my children to think like me.

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