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강사 첨삭
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My country has many holidays, for examples, Lunar New year\'s Day, Chuseok, Korean Tanksgiving Day, Hangul, Korean alphabet and many more.
>> My
country has many holidays, for example, we have the Lunar New year\'s Day, Chuseok,
Korean Thanksgiving Day, Hangul, Korean alphabet and many more.
When I was young, my favorite holiday was Lunar New Year\'s Day because I could eat many food.
>> correct!
My mother and my sister made many foods for many guests and for our ancestors.
>> My mother and my sister made many food for our guests and our ancestors.
I had to wait to eat but I always fell asleep.
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I think the biggest holiday in my country is Lunar New year\'s Day.
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Most Korean people usually meet at the home of the oldest man in the family.
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They play traditional Korean games together and eat a lot of food.
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When I was young, I really liked this time.
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However, I don\'t like Lunar New year\'s Day because I have to make many food for guests like my mother.
>> However, I don\'t like Lunar New year\'s Day now because I have to make many food for our guests just like my mother before.
During the holidays, many Korean people cook traditional food together.
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They also eat various kinds of food like Songpyeon and Tteokguk.
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Families and relatives get together during the holidays.
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Also they visit the graves of their ancestors to pay their respects.
>> correct!
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