5-6th Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Now, the postseason of the baseball game all over the world is progressing.
Recently, my favorite sports game is the baseball.
So, whenever I had a chance to see the game at the stadium, I enjoyed it with my family.
My son didn't understand the rule of the baseball game but I taught him its rules.
So, he could not totally reckon it but he enjoy it himself.
Anyway, the final winner of the Korean Baseball league was determined to the Tigers.
Until last game of the pennant race, the winner of this year was not decided.
If the Tigers lose the last game and the second place team win its last game, the second place team would be the final winner of this year.
In this situation, the Tigers eventually won the last two games.
The final second team was the Bears, but it didn't get the second place before last month.
The winning rate of the Bears in the second half season was the first place among the teams.
So, the place competition was very interesting and nervous.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
I honestly think baseball is the most popular game in Korea.
I don\'t understand it\'s mechanics because I am not a very big fan.
I hope one day I would understand how it works.
Hehe.
See you in class tomorrow.
Take care always.
~Teacher C[이름]
Now, the postseason of the baseball game all over the world is progressing.
>> Right now, the post-season for the baseball game all over the world is progressing.
Recently, my favorite sports game is the baseball.
>> Recently, baseball has become my favorite sports game.
So, whenever I had a chance to see the game at the stadium, I enjoyed it with my family.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> That\'s why whenever I had a chance to see the game at the stadium, I enjoyed it with my family.
My son didn\'t understand the rule of the baseball game but I taught him its rules.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> My son didn\'t know the rule of the baseball game so I taught him its rules.
So, he could not totally reckon it but he enjoy it himself.
>> So, he could not totally reckon it but he enjoyed it (himself).
Anyway, the final winner of the Korean Baseball league was determined to the Tigers.
>> Anyway, the final winner of the Korean Baseball league would be up to the Tigers.
Until last game of the pennant race, the winner of this year was not decided.
>> The winner of this year would not be decided until the last game of the race is over.
If the Tigers lose the last game and the second place team win its last game, the second place team would be the final winner of this year.
>> If the Tigers lose in the last game and the team on the second place wins its last game, they would be the final winner of this year.
In this situation, the Tigers eventually won the last two games.
>> [Do you mean]: The Tigers recently won the last two games.
The final second team was the Bears, but it didn\'t get the second place before last month.
>> [Do you mean]: The other team is the Bears but it didn\'t get the second place before last month.
The winning rate of the Bears in the second half season was the first place among the teams.
>> [Do you mean]: So the place of the Bears during the second half of the season was first among all teams.
So, the place competition was very interesting and nervous.
>> [Do you mean]: So, the competition is very interesting and brings out the nervousness among its viewers.
I honestly think baseball is the most popular game in Korea.
I don\'t understand it\'s mechanics because I am not a very big fan.
I hope one day I would understand how it works.
Hehe.
See you in class tomorrow.
Take care always.
~Teacher C[이름]
Now, the postseason of the baseball game all over the world is progressing.
>> Right now, the post-season for the baseball game all over the world is progressing.
Recently, my favorite sports game is the baseball.
>> Recently, baseball has become my favorite sports game.
So, whenever I had a chance to see the game at the stadium, I enjoyed it with my family.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> That\'s why whenever I had a chance to see the game at the stadium, I enjoyed it with my family.
My son didn\'t understand the rule of the baseball game but I taught him its rules.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> My son didn\'t know the rule of the baseball game so I taught him its rules.
So, he could not totally reckon it but he enjoy it himself.
>> So, he could not totally reckon it but he enjoyed it (himself).
Anyway, the final winner of the Korean Baseball league was determined to the Tigers.
>> Anyway, the final winner of the Korean Baseball league would be up to the Tigers.
Until last game of the pennant race, the winner of this year was not decided.
>> The winner of this year would not be decided until the last game of the race is over.
If the Tigers lose the last game and the second place team win its last game, the second place team would be the final winner of this year.
>> If the Tigers lose in the last game and the team on the second place wins its last game, they would be the final winner of this year.
In this situation, the Tigers eventually won the last two games.
>> [Do you mean]: The Tigers recently won the last two games.
The final second team was the Bears, but it didn\'t get the second place before last month.
>> [Do you mean]: The other team is the Bears but it didn\'t get the second place before last month.
The winning rate of the Bears in the second half season was the first place among the teams.
>> [Do you mean]: So the place of the Bears during the second half of the season was first among all teams.
So, the place competition was very interesting and nervous.
>> [Do you mean]: So, the competition is very interesting and brings out the nervousness among its viewers.
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