5.7 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Mr. [이름]! Thank you for sharing your holiday vacation. I\'m glad that you had a wonderful and enjoyable time with your family. Have a good night! See you tomorrow.
~KELLY~
Hi ma\'am! Good afternoon!
>> Correct.
Homework
How did you spend your long weekend?
I had a very happy time with my family on last weekend.
>> I had a very happy time with my family last weekend.
I went on a family trip to the Munkeung Pass in Korea.
>> Correct.
The view was such a great.
>>The view was great!
We took lots of pictures, ate delicious food and during the days, we went hiking.
>> We took lots of pictures, ate delicious foods and went hiking.
After enjoy a holiday,we arrived at hometown on Monday night.
>> After the fun holiday, we arrived at our hometown on Monday night.
We ate raw fish for dinner late night with some achohol together.
>> We ate raw fish for late night dinner with some alcohol.
It was a fantastic holiday.
>> Correct.
Thank you!
>> Correct.
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