5.7 Homework

2015-05-07 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi Kelly! Good morning! Have you enjoyed your time today? Describe your faverite room in your room? Why is this your favorite room? I like a large and comfortable bedroom. There are luxurious bed, drawer and computer in it. I often listen to a lecture on U Tube with my wife in bed. I can enjoy seeing a great green view through a window, too. But I am going to move to an another house next month. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Hi there Mr. [이름]! I hope that you are having a great day too. Anyway, thank you for your homework. I enjoyed reading it. Just go over my corrections please. Take care!~Kelly^^ Hi Kelly! Good morning! >> Correct.Have you enjoyed your time today? >> Correct.>> Did you enjoy your time today?Describe your faverite room in your room? Why is this your favorite room?I like a large and comfortable bedroom. >> Correct.There are luxurious bed, drawer and computer in it. >> There is a luxurious bed, a drawer and a computer in it. I often listen to a lecture on U Tube with my wife in bed. >> I often listen to a lecture on Youtube with my wife in bed.   I can enjoy seeing a great green view through a window, too. >> I can enjoy seeing a great green view through our window, too.   But I am going to move to an another house next month.>> But I am going to move to another house next month.Thank you! >> Correct.

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