5.7 homework
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The sport what I want to learn is basketball.
>> CORRECT.
The reason is because, I want to grow up at least 175cm.
>> CORRECT.
My height is lower than other students.
>> My height is lower than the other students.
I was so disappointed.
>> CORRECT.
But one day I heard that by playing basketball I can gain my height.
>> But, one day I heard that by playing basketball, I can increase my height.
So i am planning to learn basketball and also by playing basketball with friends may can help make friends and have more better friendship..
>> So, I am planning to learn basketball and also by playing basketball with friends may can help make new friends and to have more better friendship.
good job [이름] ^^ see you tomorrow :D
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