5/7 homework

2018-05-08 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

학생이 쓴 원문

[write about something [material] I received that has been meaningful to me] This question is very notional one and makes me think deeply. Nowadays to me, the most meaningful thing is passion along with my work performance. Maintaining balance between work and love is still difficult. However, fortunately, my husband fully support me as well. I think 30's is the period I can try anything and do my best. In the very busy days, when I take rest with my family, I feel both of the happiness and satisfaction. My husband and I have a our own dream for the living. We are going to close more and more everyday.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!

You know how much I appreciate your effort in doing your homework.

I hope you\'ll never get tired.

Just one reminder, please read the instruction properly. I indicated the word \"material\" there.

Perhaps you didn\'t notice.

See you tomorrow.

~Teacher Shanee^^, 


[write about something [material] I received that has been meaningful to me]

This question is very notional one and makes me think deeply.

>>> OR: This question is very notional that it makes me think deeply.
 Nowadays to me, the most meaningful thing is passion along with my work performance. 

>>> Nowadays, the most meaningful thing to me is my passion for work and my work performance.
 Maintaining balance between work and love is still difficult. 

>>> Correct!
 However, fortunately, my husband fully support me as well. 

>>> However, fortunately, my husband fully supports me.
 I think 30\'s is the period I can try anything and do my best. 

>>> I think 30\'s is the period when I can try anything and do my best.
 In the very busy days, when I take rest with my family, I feel both of the happiness and satisfaction.

>>> When I take a rest with my family on very busy days, I feel happy and satisfied.
 My husband and I have a our own dream for the living. 

>>> My husband and I have our dream life.
 We are going to close more and more everyday.

>>> We are getting closer and closer every day.

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