5/7 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!
You know how much I appreciate your effort in doing your homework.
I hope you\'ll never get tired.
Just one reminder, please read the instruction properly. I indicated the word \"material\" there.
Perhaps you didn\'t notice.
See you tomorrow.
~Teacher Shanee^^,
[write about something [material] I received that has been meaningful to me]
This question is very notional one and makes me think deeply.
>>> OR: This question is very notional that it makes me think deeply.
Nowadays to me, the most meaningful thing is passion along with my work performance.
>>> Nowadays, the most meaningful thing to me is my passion for work and my work performance.
Maintaining balance between work and love is still difficult.
>>> Correct!
However, fortunately, my husband fully support me as well.
>>> However, fortunately, my husband fully supports me.
I think 30\'s is the period I can try anything and do my best.
>>> I think 30\'s is the period when I can try anything and do my best.
In the very busy days, when I take rest with my family, I feel both of the happiness and satisfaction.
>>> When I take a rest with my family on very busy days, I feel happy and satisfied.
My husband and I have a our own dream for the living.
>>> My husband and I have our dream life.
We are going to close more and more everyday.
>>> We are getting closer and closer every day.
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