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> They say lending or borrowing money from a friend is not a good idea. What do you think?
I think that lending or borrowing money from friends is not good. Because it can make relationship between friends bad. The money is sensible factor so that we need to consider carefully on lending and borrowing. In my case, when i borrow some money from friends, i try to give back as soon as possible. When i lend money, i used to help person who i can believe. As a result, in my relationship i try not to tie with money.
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Hello [이름]. Thank you for this. Very well said. Money can turn relationships sour.
- T. Beth
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I think that lending or borrowing money from friends is not good. >>>> correct
Because it can make relationship between friends bad.
>>>> OR: Because it can make the relationship between friends bad.
>>>> OR: Because it can ruin the relationship between friends.
The money is sensible factor so that we need to consider carefully on lending and borrowing.
>>>> The money is a sensible factor that we need to consider carefully when lending and borrowing.
In my case, when i borrow some money from friends, i try to give back as soon as possible.
>>>> correct ( In my case, when I borrow some money from friends, I try to give it back as soon as possible. )
When i lend money, i used to help person who i can believe.
>>>> When I lend money, I used to help the person I can trust.
As a result, in my relationship i try not to tie with money.
>>>> As a result, in my relationships, I try not to be tied with money.
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