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Hi there Ms. [이름]!
You said you don\'t know much about your country\'s politics but you answered my question very well. Well, I guess you\'ll have to know about these presidential candidates because your election is coming very soon. See you in class!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
You looked seem interest of my country\'s politics.
>> You looked interested on my country\'s politics.
OR>> You seemed interested in my country\'s politics.
You are right.
>> correct!
Moon Jae-in is very old poiticaian also he has a lot of political experienc in my country.
>> Moon Jae-in is a very old politician and he also has a lot of political experience in my country.
Ban Ki-moon is very popular and he has a lot of U.N. experience.
>> correct!
However, many young people in my country want a new man.
>> correct
Lee Jae myung is one of men ans many young people prefer him.
>> Lee Jae Myung is one of the new men and many young people prefer men.
He is younger than Mr. [Name] and Mr. [Name].
>> correct!
And he has many the reasones to want many young people.
>> And he has many qualities that many young people like.
Maybe many young people of my country want to change my country from a new man.
>> Maybe many young people from my country want a younger man.
Anyway, I don\'t know my country\'s politics and it is very difficult.
>> correct!
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