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2017-04-10 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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I think per people are different. But I want my children a lot of challenge in their life. I am doing challenge with English and I am not smart so I want that many people think about me very smart woman. That is a reason why I am doing challenge.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Ms. [이름]!
Everyone must face challenges in their lives. You think learning English is one of your challenges. Well, the good thing is your trying your best to face this challenge and you are doing good. Don\'t worry.
Take care!
~T. Lynn
I think per people are different.
>> I think every person is different.
But I want my children a lot of challenge in their life.
>> But I want my children to have a lot of challenges in their lives.
I am doing challenge with English and I am not smart so I want that many people think about me very smart woman.
>> I am challenging myself with English and I am not smart so I want many people to think about me as a very smart woman.
That is a reason why I am doing challenge.
>>That is the reason why I am doing this challenge.

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